I've been asked in my class to write a short text describing my house, before showing it to the teacher I'd like to ask for your help and tell me if I made any mistakes

Thank you all!
The text:
我住在米兰。我的房子在一套公寓里边儿。
我家离商场近。我家后边儿还有一个足球场。我房子在八楼,有 厨房, 一共两室两厅两卫, 还有一个阳台。 客厅不大,可是卧室的采光都真好。